This week we are doing zones this is my green zone it's about joy this is what goes
through my head when i'm happy!Wheae Katie gave the hole of Te Hiringa class!!
Hi there Isabelle! My name is Hana from Yaldhurst Model School! I like the way you listed all the things that you feel if you are in the green zone. I always feel happy, excited, joyful, enthusiastic, blessed, jolly, Gleeful, and cheerful! Next time maybe you could explain what the green zone is!
HI Isabelle I'm Michaela from Yaldhurst Model School I feel green same times because my sister bullies me a lot. My question when do you feel in the green zone???? I enjoyed the part when you put what you can feel like. Michaela
Hi Michaela, I'm Isabelle from Grey Main school. My green zone is about being happy and I think that when someone is bullying you,you may feel more in the red zone or the yellow zone or even the blue zone. The red zone is about feeling angry,the yellow zone is about feeling scared,the blue zone is feeling sad so you may feel those feelings when your sister bullies you!thank you for commenting on my blog post from Isabelle
hi isabelle im alvin form yms I think you work is really good but I think that you need to add a bit more picheres and a bit more detail, but the rest is fine
Hi isabelle my name is lucas I go to yaldhurst model school I like your blog post next time you need to add more pichers and more deatall but the rest is fine.
Kia ora Isabelle, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked the way you added up all the things you might be feeling if you are in the green zone. I also liked how you had pictures of how you might look if you are in the green zone. You are really good at picking pictures because I really like that puppy one. *WOOF WOOF!*🐶
The facts you have used are really good. My favourite one is enthusiastic because we truly have some enthusiastic learners in our class! When I read your post I learnt a bit about the green zone. A lot of young kids probably don't know animals can feel different ways but I already knew that. I still appreciate the way you have a picture of an adorably happy puppy.
To improve, I think you should add more writing instead of only writing the things you might feel. Also I think something that would help is adding spaces after the commas. Commas don't count as spaces.
Question time!
Why did you do the background like that?
Bye! I really enjoyed reading and looking at this blog post. I hope to see more high quality posts from you.
Hello Isabelle. I love how told your blog people about the green zone. Next time you might be able to tell you blog people about what makes you happy? I love how you told us what is the green zone. Anyway you loved reading your post. From Renae
Hi there Isabelle My name is Jonathon I am a year 6 From yaldhurst model school.
I love that you have used awsome diffrent shades of colour to your poster. This reminided me of when I saw some people do something similar like red zone .
nextime you cold add some of your own pictures. yours sincerely Jonathon
kia ora Jonathon,Thank you for commenting on my blog!!I have also done a red zone!next time I will try to put my own pictures in! kind regards Isabelle
Kia ora Isabella, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way how you told people about the green zone. The facts that you used was really cool and awesome. Next time, make sure to add some more happiness photos.
Hi there Isabelle! My name is Hana from Yaldhurst Model School! I like the way you listed all the things that you feel if you are in the green zone. I always feel happy, excited, joyful, enthusiastic, blessed, jolly, Gleeful, and cheerful! Next time maybe you could explain what the green zone is!
ReplyDeleteKind regards Hana :D
HI Isabelle I'm Michaela from Yaldhurst Model School
ReplyDeleteI feel green same times because my sister bullies me a lot.
My question when do you feel in the green zone????
I enjoyed the part when you put what you can feel like.
Michaela
Hi Michaela, I'm Isabelle from Grey Main school. My green zone is about being happy and I think that when someone is bullying you,you may feel more in the red zone or the yellow zone or even the blue zone. The red zone is about feeling angry,the yellow zone is about feeling scared,the blue zone is feeling sad so you may feel those feelings when your sister bullies you!thank you for commenting on my blog post
Deletefrom Isabelle
hi isabelle im alvin form yms I think you work is really good but I think that you need to add a bit more picheres and a bit more detail, but the rest is fine
DeleteHi isabelle my name is lucas I go to yaldhurst model school I like your blog post next time you need to add more pichers and more deatall but the rest is fine.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Isabelle, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added up all the things you might be feeling if you are in the green zone. I also liked how you had pictures of how you might look if you are in the green zone. You are really good at picking pictures because I really like that puppy one. *WOOF WOOF!*🐶
The facts you have used are really good. My favourite one is enthusiastic because we truly have some enthusiastic learners in our class! When I read your post I learnt a bit about the green zone. A lot of young kids probably don't know animals can feel different ways but I already knew that. I still appreciate the way you have a picture of an adorably happy puppy.
To improve, I think you should add more writing instead of only writing the things you might feel. Also I think something that would help is adding spaces after the commas. Commas don't count as spaces.
Question time!
Why did you do the background like that?
Bye! I really enjoyed reading and looking at this blog post. I hope to see more high quality posts from you.
-Amelia 😀
Hello Isabelle. I love how told your blog people about the green zone.
ReplyDeleteNext time you might be able to tell you blog people about what makes you happy? I love how you told us what is the green zone. Anyway you loved reading your post. From Renae
Hi there Isabelle My name is Jonathon I am a year 6 From yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI love that you have used awsome diffrent shades of colour to your poster.
This reminided me of when I saw some people do something similar like red zone .
nextime you cold add some of your own pictures.
yours sincerely Jonathon
kia ora Jonathon,Thank you for commenting on my blog!!I have also done a red zone!next time I will try to put my own pictures in!
Deletekind regards Isabelle
Kia ora Isabella, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way how you told people about the green zone. The facts that you used was really cool and awesome. Next time, make sure to add some more happiness photos.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Zahrah.