Monday, July 1, 2019

This term in greymain school we have been learning on how to be an upstander me and my group(Maddy,Mackenzie,Kobe and Me)made this short film!to make the characters we used Popsicle sticks and then we coloured in the actors in and then glued the people onto the sticks and then acted the characters out!

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I think this video you made was really creative and cool. I like the way you had the characters and put them on sticks. The planet was cool too!

    There are lots of facts in this video. They might not be written down but they are there. Instead of reading them I can see them and hear them. There is so much creativity in this post.

    To improve maybe you could make a background to it. Instead of just having the planet you could have a little classroom in the background, maybe a playground, even some flowers or alien plants would make it look cooler. But great job on what you did do.

    How did you think of this idea?

    Bye, I'd love to see more amazing blog posts from you so keep it up.

    -Amelia 😉

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  2. Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School.I loved this because it was pretty cool. I think this video is interesting and creative. Next time, add a bit more information.

    Kind Regards, Zahrah.

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  3. Kia ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I enjoyed the part when someone stands up for the other.

    The facts you have used are really good.

    Next time maybe you could add one more character.

    (: Kind Regards Jorja :)

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