In Te hiringa last week we have been learning to write Haiku poems.A Haiku is a Japanese poem that has three lines.On the first line there are five syllables, on the second line there are seven syllables.Here is my Haiku about Lions.
Ki ora My name Is Ethan I am A year 5 at yaldhurst model school I like Lions to I did not no that that was a ion next time I think you should write more about the lion? loved it though
Hi My name is Olivia at Yaldhurst Model School so yeah I really like the adjectives that you put into there. I think next time you should put in more words in there. Was it a poem because it looked like one ?. That was a great post.
Hi my name is Laura from Yaldhurst school wow you knocked my socks off because of how you described how lions behave you brought me back to when I was reading a book and it explained what a haiku is! To improve you could add what a haiku is why did you choose a lion to write a haiku about? Kind regards Laura frome yaldhurst school.
Ki ora My name Is Ethan I am A year 5 at yaldhurst model school I like Lions to I did not no that that was a ion next time I think you should write more about the lion? loved it though
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Hi My name is Olivia at Yaldhurst Model School so yeah I really like the adjectives that you put into there. I think next time you should put in more words in there. Was it a poem because it looked like one ?. That was a great post.
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Hi my name is Laura from Yaldhurst school
ReplyDeletewow you knocked my socks off because of how you described how lions behave
you brought me back to when I was reading a book and it explained what a haiku is! To improve you could add what a haiku is why did you choose a lion to write a haiku about?
Kind regards Laura frome yaldhurst school.